Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Music Success in Nine Weeks - Week 2 Part 2

So after a little mirror talking and testing on family, here is my second elevator pitch:

Sounds like Andrew Bird, Phillip Glass and Lewis Carroll trapped in a dream. You wake from the reverie to find not the orchestra you were expecting, but a solo barefoot violinist. Curiouser and curiouser...



I'm not quite sure whether to replace my other one, or use it in conjunction. This one has a bit more of a theatrical feel to it, which I like, but doesn't explain the digital effects part of my performance. Does it need to?

One suggestion I got was that people might not get the "curiouser and curiouser" quote, but I think it will work well with the people it's aimed for.

Yours curiously,

Jane

1 comments:

  1. Love your elevator pitch! There probably will be some people that don't understand the "curiouser and curiouser" part, but I found it clever, maybe just use it when you target sources that are likely to understand the joke. I was excited to read your thoughts on week 3! I hope you'll consider finishing the blog challenge (or sign up for wave 2 if you don't want to play catch up) You are off to a great start!

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