So after a little mirror talking and testing on family, here is my second elevator pitch:
Sounds like Andrew Bird, Phillip Glass and Lewis Carroll trapped in a dream. You wake from the reverie to find not the orchestra you were expecting, but a solo barefoot violinist. Curiouser and curiouser...
I'm not quite sure whether to replace my other one, or use it in conjunction. This one has a bit more of a theatrical feel to it, which I like, but doesn't explain the digital effects part of my performance. Does it need to?
One suggestion I got was that people might not get the "curiouser and curiouser" quote, but I think it will work well with the people it's aimed for.
Yours curiously,
Jane

Love your elevator pitch! There probably will be some people that don't understand the "curiouser and curiouser" part, but I found it clever, maybe just use it when you target sources that are likely to understand the joke. I was excited to read your thoughts on week 3! I hope you'll consider finishing the blog challenge (or sign up for wave 2 if you don't want to play catch up) You are off to a great start!
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